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Posted by Preetam Singh 
Almost there
January 13, 2011 12:51PM
The rain is subtle,
visions of my beloved will follow.
The wind is stirring,
I will no longer feel hollow.
The bells are ringing,
I think he's coming.
Let us not waver,
just keep on humming.

Do you hear the hooves of his horse coming closer?
Just outside, he's waiting to give us darshan!
Let us decorate our house,
lay the bed,
prepare the water,
to wash his pavitar charan kamal.
Let us gather our tears.
Make garlands of pain.
of seperation.
our love filled longings.

Amrit is in the air,
we are almost there!
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 12:59PM
PROFOUNDLY AMAZING!
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 01:00PM
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ਕਰਿ ਕਿਰਪਾ ਘਰਿ ਆਇਆ ਆਪੇ ਮਿਲਿਆ ਆਇ ॥
By His Grace, He has come into my home; He Himself has come to meet me.

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ਰਾਮ ਭਗਤਿ ਬੈਠੇ ਘਰਿ ਆਇਆ ॥੨॥
Because of my devotion to the Lord, He has come to sit within the home of my inner being. ||2||

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ਪ੍ਰਗਟਿਆ ਸੂਰੁ ਜੋਤਿ ਉਜੀਆਰਾ ॥
The sun has risen, and its light shines brightly.

ਸੇਜ ਵਿਛਾਈ ਸਰਧ ਅਪਾਰਾ ॥
I have prepared my bed with infinite care and faith.

ਨਵ ਰੰਗ ਲਾਲੁ ਸੇਜ ਰਾਵਣ ਆਇਆ ॥
My Darling Beloved is new and fresh; He has come to my bed to enjoy me.

ਜਨ ਨਾਨਕ ਪਿਰ ਧਨ ਮਿਲਿ ਸੁਖੁ ਪਾਇਆ ॥੪॥੪॥
O Servant Nanak, my Husband Lord has come; the soul-bride has found peace. ||4||4||
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 01:29PM
Vahegurooooooo
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 01:52PM
Vaheguru!!
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 01:58PM
Beautiful!
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 08:57PM
I can hear the rain
outside of my door;
but visions of my beloved
are far from my core.
My heart is reaching,
my soul is beseeching,
for a look or a sign
that He will be mine.
I can hear the rain
outside of my door;
Meet me my beloved,
to thee, I implore.
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Re: Almost there
January 13, 2011 09:51PM
ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 04:27AM
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My heart is reaching,
my soul is beseeching,
for a look or a sign
that He will be mine.
I can hear the rain
outside of my door;
Meet me my beloved,
to thee, I implore.

Bahut Khoob!

Subhaan! Subhaan!



Kulbir Singh
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 09:24AM
Vaheguru! Vaheguru! beautiful writing!
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 09:49AM
Piareo !!

He didnt have to come , he was already here
He was with us for ages , but we didn't care

All he needed to show up , was a little fare
The Fare he ever demanded was a solid Prayer
Amritvela, Rehats,24 Hrs Naam - did we ever dare ?

Before we see him clear, the 5 enemies within are to pare
The moment these are beaten, he will be everywhere around in air

Many take this Manukh Janam,one's get across are rare
Let me share, you Gurmukhs have your names surely there !!
Keep up the spirits with Naam,Bani - And get ready for the GLARE !!

He didnt have to come , he was already here
He was with us for ages , but we didn't care


Bhul Chuk Maaf !!
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 09:50AM
More!
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 10:06AM
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AmritKaur
My heart is reaching,
my soul is beseeching,
for a look or a sign
that He will be mine.
I can hear the rain
outside of my door;
Meet me my beloved,
to thee, I implore.


Just keep your heart beating
and your Amrit soul cleansing,
follow the sign and He will be yours.
Let the rain drops be Amrit,
them pouring will open your door.
You will meet with Him whilst Naam japping
then no longer will you need to implore.
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 10:34AM
ਤਕਦੀ ਰਾਹ ਆਪਣੇ ਪ੍ਰੀਤਮ ਦਾ,ਮਨ ਵਿਚ ਵਿਓਂਤ ਬਨਾਵ੍ਦੀਂ ਹਾਂ
ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂਗੀ ਸੋਹਣੇ ਦੇ ਦੀਦਾਰ ਪਾ ਕੇ, ਸੋਚਦੀ ਤੇ ਸਰ੍ਮਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਏਨੀ ਦੇਰ ਤੋਂ ਨਹੀ ਦੀਦਾਰ ਕੀਤੇ,ਸੋਹਣੇ-ਸੋਹਣੇ ਵੇਸ ਬਨਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਜਾਣਦੀ ਓਹਨੂ ਬਾਣੀ/ਨਾਮ ਭਾਉਂਦਾ,ਫੇਰ ਵੀ ਦਿਲ ਚੋਰਾਂਵ੍ਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਮੁਸ਼ਕਿਲ ਗੰਭੀਰ ਮੇਰੇ ਤੇ ਬਣ ਬੇਠੀ,੫ ਭੂਤਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਬਾਰ-੨ ਜਫੇ ਪਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਪਤਾ ਹੈ ਇਹ ਮੇਰੇ ਓਹਦੇ ਵਿਚ ਰੋੜੇ,ਕਿਓਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਏਨਾ ਨੂੰ ਵੰਗਾਰਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਬਲ ਕੋਲ ਏਨਾ,ਤਾਹੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਦਰ-੨ ਦੇ ਧਕੇ ਖਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਦੇਖ ਆਪਣੇ ਆਪ ਨੂੰ ਕਮਜੋਰ ਏਨਾ, ਦੋਹਾਈ ਮਾਹੀ ਦਰ ਤੇ ਪਾਵੰਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਕਰ ਕਿਰਪਾ,ਖਾ ਤਰਸ ਮਿਤਰਾ,ਤੇਰੇ ਦਰਸ ਬਿਨਾ ਮਰਦੀ ਜਾਵ੍ਦੀ ਹਾਂ


Bhul Chuk Maaf !!
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 10:35AM
good ideas!

daas,
khalsaij.
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 02:05PM
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gursewak:
ਤਕਦੀ ਰਾਹ ਆਪਣੇ ਪ੍ਰੀਤਮ ਦਾ,ਮਨ ਵਿਚ ਵਿਓਂਤ ਬਨਾਵ੍ਦੀਂ ਹਾਂ
ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂਗੀ ਸੋਹਣੇ ਦੇ ਦੀਦਾਰ ਪਾ ਕੇ, ਸੋਚਦੀ ਤੇ ਸਰ੍ਮਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਏਨੀ ਦੇਰ ਤੋਂ ਨਹੀ ਦੀਦਾਰ ਕੀਤੇ,ਸੋਹਣੇ-ਸੋਹਣੇ ਵੇਸ ਬਨਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਜਾਣਦੀ ਓਹਨੂ ਬਾਣੀ/ਨਾਮ ਭਾਉਂਦਾ,ਫੇਰ ਵੀ ਦਿਲ ਚੋਰਾਂਵ੍ਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਮੁਸ਼ਕਿਲ ਗੰਭੀਰ ਮੇਰੇ ਤੇ ਬਣ ਬੇਠੀ,੫ ਭੂਤਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਬਾਰ-੨ ਜਫੇ ਪਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਪਤਾ ਹੈ ਇਹ ਮੇਰੇ ਓਹਦੇ ਵਿਚ ਰੋੜੇ,ਕਿਓਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਏਨਾ ਨੂੰ ਵੰਗਾਰਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਬਲ ਕੋਲ ਏਨਾ,ਤਾਹੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਦਰ-੨ ਦੇ ਧਕੇ ਖਾਵਂਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਦੇਖ ਆਪਣੇ ਆਪ ਨੂੰ ਕਮਜੋਰ ਏਨਾ, ਦੋਹਾਈ ਮਾਹੀ ਦਰ ਤੇ ਪਾਵੰਦੀ ਹਾਂ
ਕਰ ਕਿਰਪਾ,ਖਾ ਤਰਸ ਮਿਤਰਾ,ਤੇਰੇ ਦਰਸ ਬਿਨਾ ਮਰਦੀ ਜਾਵ੍ਦੀ ਹਾਂ

pushan ohna bhainan nu, kiven paaiaa darshan maahi da
ik bol vee saanjha kar dayvay, sadkay os kamaaee da
sakheeaan suhaagan ban gaeeaan, naam jap jap aap gava gaaeeaan
panjaan choran nu kaabu kar kay, preetam day dar jaa paaeeaan
mainu vee thaapi dayvo bhaino, prem-bhagti kar ke tar jaavaan
saaeen day dar sees niva kay, preetam ghorri charr jaavaan.

(I apologize, I didn't know how to type it in punjabi font on the forum,
bhul chuk maaf karna ji)
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Re: Almost there
January 14, 2011 04:31PM
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AmritKaur
pushan ohna bhainan nu, kiven paaiaa darshan maahi da
ik bol vee saanjha kar dayvay, sadkay os kamaaee da
sakheeaan suhaagan ban gaeeaan, naam jap jap aap gava gaaeeaan
panjaan choran nu kaabu kar kay, preetam day dar jaa paaeeaan
mainu vee thaapi dayvo bhaino, prem-bhagti kar ke tar jaavaan
saaeen day dar sees niva kay, preetam ghorri charr jaavaan.


Vaaheguru ji!!!! Bhainji, that was so touching and full of emotion. Please write more poems like this. Punjabi is your poetic language.
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Re: Almost there
January 15, 2011 11:39AM
bohat khub!
Just wonderful!

Daas,
Khalsaji.
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Re: Almost there
January 15, 2011 12:30PM
VAHEGURU!VAHEGURU!
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Re: Almost there
January 15, 2011 01:47PM
If I was a king I would give all poets (preetamsingh, gursewak, Amritkaur, Amritvela,etc...) a reward you deserve.

vah!vah!kia bat hai!
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Re: Almost there
January 15, 2011 02:07PM
then i should write a poem so i can get gift.
lol

daas,
khalsaji.
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Re: Almost there
January 16, 2011 09:45PM
beautiful poems! please do share more. smiling smiley

Vaaheguru Jee Kaa Khalsaa Vaaheguru Jee Kee Fatehh!
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