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MainMannTannVadrheeAas (Poem)

Posted by Tanvir Singh 
MainMannTannVadrheeAas (Poem)
November 27, 2010 08:13PM
I was listening to the following Shabad, which was like a Prem Daa Teer, hence, inspired me to write this little piece.


ਚਿਰੀ ਵਿਛੁੰਨਾ ਮੇਲਿ ਪ੍ਰਭ ਮੈ ਮਨਿ ਤਨਿ ਵਡੜੀ ਆਸ ॥
ਗੁਰ ਭਾਵੈ ਸੁਣਿ ਬੇਨਤੀ ਜਨ ਨਾਨਕ ਕੀ ਅਰਦਾਸਿ ॥



What words shall I use, none seem just right
I have tried countless times, daytime and at night
I just want to write and share, I just want to express
The pain that I am enduring, the burden on my chest

Assist me, don’t resist me, despite my countless sins
Correct me, please protect me, from kalyug’s poisonous fins
I am rolling in dirt, thinking it is gold, what is this all about?
The 5 thieves have tied my hands, only you can help me out

I still remember that day, even though time has flown away
When you blessed me the eternal nectar, showed me the right way
When I stepped into that room, I was asked to say
VahegurooJeeKaaKhalsaa VahegurooJeeKeeFatheh

There were 5 of them, long bearded and turbaned, grouped together
Just looking at them, I felt a surge of cold, in the hot June weather
They were stirring an iron bowl, with a double-edged iron sword
Each read a special prayer, and then I was taught how to say this WORD

It’s not a WORD, it’s so much more, only a few people find it true
I wish to be in that company, so I am requesting you
I have dedicated everything to you, my body, my soul and wealth
I try to practise Bani, Bana, Seva & Simran, is there anything else?

Many Say Hari Hari, Many Say Raam Raam
Vahegurooo is what I utter, I am told this is your true naam
Pardon my sins, uplift my weaknesses, I know the faults are all mine
I don’t want to come back here again father, please carry me across this time



Please forgive any childishness in the poem

Daas Tanvir Singh
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ਵਾਹ ਬਈ ਤਨਵੀਰੇਆ ਵਾਹ


ਕਿੱਤੇ ਦਾਸਾ ਦੀ ਝੋਲੀ ਵੀ ਨਾਮ ਦੇ ਨਾਲ ਭਰ ਜਾਏ ਸਵਾਦ ਆਜੂ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਵੀ!
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Subhaan! Subhaan!
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bhai sahib kulbir singh jee and bhai jaspreet singh jee

guroo sahib is subhaan!!!!!!!!


it's been too long

tusee doven vee kirpaa karo

english chh jaa gurmukhi chh

aap jee dee khushee aa

but write something please
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ਕੀ ਲਿਖਾਂ? ਕੀ ਸੋਚਾ?
ਸੋਚ ਸੋਚ ਕੇ ਪਾਹ ਨਹੀ ਸਕਦਾ
ਕੀ ਬੋਲਾ? ਕੀ ਸਮਝਾ?
ਬੋਲ ਬੋਲ ਕੇ ਜਾਂ ਫਿਰ ਚੁੱਪ ਰਹਿ ਕੇ ਵੀ ਨਹੀ ਪਾਇਆ ਜਾ ਸਕਦਾ!
ਕੀ ਕਂਵਾ ੳਹਦੇ ਬਾਰੇ?
ਮੈਂ ਤਾਂ ਬਲਿਹਾਰਾ ਜਾਂਵਾਂ ਉਸ ਸਤਿਗੁਰ ਤੋਂ
ੳਹ ਜੀਹਨੇ ਮੇਨੂੰ ਰਾਹ ਵੀਖਾਲਤਾ ਵੇ!
ੳਂਗਲ ਫੜ ਕੇ ਰਾਹ 'ਚ ਆਏ ਕੰਢਿਆਂ ਤੋਂ ਬਚਾੳਂਦਾ ਏਆ
ਭੁੱਖ ਲੱਗਣ ਤੇ ਖਾਣਾ ਖਵਾਂਦਾਏਆ!
ਨਾਮ ਜੱਪਣ ਲੀ ਪਰੇਰਦਾਏਆ!
ਗੁਰਸਿੱਖਾਂ ਦੀ ਸੰਗਤ 'ਚ ਰੱਖਦਾਏਆ!
ਖੂਬ ਬਖ਼ਸ਼ਿਸ਼ਾਂ ਕਰਦਾਏਆਂ!
ਕੀ ਕਂਵਾਂ ਉਦੇ ਬਾਰੇ?
ਕੀ ਕਂਵਾਂ?
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Jaspreet Singhaaa

Jee Khush Kartaa Aj Sachee smiling bouncing smiley


Yeah , there are no words to describe guroo sahib's charnaa kamlaa dee mauj
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Bhai Tanvir Singh Ji, that was a wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing it!

Also kudos to Bhai Jaspreet Singh Ji for also sharing the thoughtful and unique piece of poetry!


May Guru Sahib keep us and give us the strength to forever remain and stay His Charan!

WAHEGURU JI KA KHALSA WAHEGURU JI KI FATEH
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Tanvir Singh jeeo,

Daas, with the kirpa of Guru Sahib, will write a poem in a week's time.

Kulbir Singh
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