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Posted by Sukhdev Singh 
likhaaree
May 11, 2010 06:01AM
Love, look at the state of your writers
always trying to capture you in words
tears in their eyes and on the page
unable to write your love has bound them in this state
be merciful and give them your gift
le them write your name
on their heart
in their breath
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Re: likhaaree
May 11, 2010 09:14AM
Open translation of Veer Sukhdev Singh's work above.

ਹਰਿ ਜੱਸ ਲਿਖਣ ਵਾਲਿਆਂ ਦੀ, ਦੇਖ ਦਸ਼ਾ ਤੂੰ ਸਾਂਈਆਂ ਜੀ।
ਅਖੀਂ ਨੀਰ, ਦਿਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਛੁਰੀ, ਆਸਾਂ ਬੜੀਆਂ ਲਾਈਆਂ ਜੀ।

ਕਰਿ ਦਇਆ ਕਰ ਮਇਆ, ਕਲਮ ਸਾਡੀ ਨਾ ਰੁਕੇ ਕਦੇ ਵੀ।
ਜੀਭ ਜਪੇ ਤੇ ਮਨ ਧਿਆਵੇ, ਥਾਂਇ ਪੈਣ ਇਹ ਕਮਾਈਆਂ ਜੀ
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Re: likhaaree
May 11, 2010 09:16AM
Sukhdev Singh jeeo, it is interesting that you have addressed Vaheguru as "Love". In Gurbani, he is mostly addressed as "Pyaara" as opposed to "Pyaar".

Kulbir Singh
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Re: likhaaree
May 11, 2010 10:21AM
maaf karna jee,

I didn't know what else to say.
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Re: likhaaree
May 11, 2010 11:12AM
If there is a sin, then it is not loving You....
If there is a crime, then it is forgetting You...
If there is a mistake, then it is not wanting You...
If there is a misfortune, then it is not KNOWING You...

If there is devotion, then it is loosing myself in You...
If there is beauty, then it is the sight of those who are in love with You....
If there is life, then it is remembering you ....
If there is Love, then it is You, You and Only You...

~Piyasi...Piyasi...Piyasi Chatrik~

Chota veer
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Re: likhaaree
May 11, 2010 12:04PM
Sukhdev Singh ji, your poems are always amusing. Thank you smiling smiley
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Re: likhaaree
May 12, 2010 08:43AM
Beautiful poems!
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