Sore...

Heartsore
Love pour.

Eyesore
Flooded floor.

Footsore
Empty tour.



You, I adore
I am sure.

You, I explore
Morning uproar.

You, I no more
Naam outpour!

Vaheguroo!!

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ਮੇਰੀ ਮਤਿ ਥੋਰੀ ਰਾਮ

Kyaa Baat hai! The lines are so simple, so terse, yet so meaningful.

Well done Amritvela jeeo.

Kulbir Singh

Well Written Ji !!

Vaheguru jee ka Khalsa Vaheguru jee kee fateh!

Vaheguroooo
Bohuth khoob amritvela jee

Vah... this poem expresses the true sentiments of the Gursikh.