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19 Years (Poem)

Posted by Upkaar Singh 
19 Years (Poem)
January 07, 2011 06:03PM
The following is a reflection of daas's jeevan



19 Years


Nineteen years have passed, not a single step towards you I have taken,

Indulged in Kalyugi Forces, My Lord, you’re the one I have forsaken.

Time flies so swiftly, it seems to be moving in fast forward motion,

I haven’t lived up to my promises, drinking your Amrit was like taking any potion.



Forgive me oh creator, for I have forgotten your name.

I’m your piece, move me in the right direction, isn’t this your game?

I’ll bark like a dog if it pleases you, just to get your attention,

Cleanse me, uplift me, hold me close, and grant me redemption.



People beg to have the darshan of your beautiful face; I ask to see your lotus feet,

Washing them, I shall drink that water; I will place your Charan Kamal on a white sheet.

I shall use my hair to cleanse, purify and dust your seating place,

Then I shall gaze upon you, with teary eyes, in this heart, for you I left no space.



With mere mortals in this world, I have found attachment and peace,

I’m proud of my friends and I show them love, for you, I never did the least.

As I sit here scribbling words, I’m reminded of my dark and horrible past,

Bestow you mercy Vaheguroo Jeeo, life is passing by very fast.



The treasure of your Naam and the Company of Gursikhs are the gifts I seek,

The gurmukhs have gotten lost in your colors, I only ask for a small peek.

Nineteen years have passed, not a single step towards you I have taken,

SabaiGallaanVisaranEkoVisarNaaJaao, why is it YOU, that I have forsaken?




Daas,
Upkaar Singh
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 07, 2011 06:52PM
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Bestow **YOUR** mercy Vaheguroo Jee, Life is passing by very fast
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 07, 2011 07:36PM
Bahut Khoob, Upkaar Singh jeeo.

It's refreshing to see a poem posted here after what seems like eternity.

Kulbir Singh
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 08, 2011 01:49PM
Beautiful writing Upkaar singh jeeo,thumbs up

its very good to see that you still remember to write a poem after a long time.

keep it up!!!

daas,
khalsaji.
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 08, 2011 05:13PM
Vaheguroo Jeeo, it's guroo sahib's kirpa. I just write how I feel.
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 08, 2011 10:30PM

ਤੁਮ ਸੋ ਸਾਲ ਜੀੳ
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 09, 2011 04:06PM
Vaheguroo jee

100 saal veerjee ?
in this kalyug ?

I'd rather live a short and successful life than a long worthless one
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 09, 2011 04:33PM
waheguru!waheguru!

daas,
khalsaji.
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 25, 2011 01:59PM
beautiful poem
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Re: 19 Years (Poem)
January 25, 2011 04:50PM
Waheguru!!!...beautiful poem! smiling smiley
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