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Bir Ras

Posted by sk 
Bir Ras
August 14, 2010 02:41PM
Just me and you
Guroo, gurroo
Shaster gripped between my fingers
Waheguroo, waheguroo
in, out
in, out
I breathe, slow
it waves before me
in, out, back and in
wah guroo, wah guroo
the air pulls in deeper
thoughts fade
heart races

no chinta

Just me and you
guroo, guroo
faster now
limbs dancing to the shaster's whim
lungs take in wind
vah Gurrooo
it's vibrating
amrit's coursing faster now
no control - all control
power
my breathing becomes worship
naam khanda sounding, resounding
rebounding
-off the walls
vah gurrooooo
where did it come from?

all I know, is this is freedom

Gurroo, gurrooo,
take me higher
Vahguru
just me and you
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Re: Bir Ras
August 14, 2010 02:47PM
waheguru ji ka khalsa, waheguru ji ki fateh!


that was beautiful

Waheguru Ji Ka Khalsa, Waheguru Ji Ki Fateh!
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Re: Bir Ras
August 14, 2010 07:32PM
That is powerful and compact, like nuclear energy.
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Re: Bir Ras
August 14, 2010 08:53PM
Shabaash SK jeeo!

The heart was waiting for your new poem for sometime. Thanks for posting.

Continue to write and share.

Kulbir Singh
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Re: Bir Ras
August 14, 2010 10:33PM
wow! no words! thanks bhenjee!
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Re: Bir Ras
August 15, 2010 07:53AM
WHAT A NASHAA !!!!!
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Re: Bir Ras
August 15, 2010 10:01AM
Wah! what a beautiful poem, bhenji!
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Re: Bir Ras
August 15, 2010 05:08PM
Wah, mind blowing
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