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I wish . . .

Posted by Amritvela 
I wish . . .
November 28, 2010 07:22PM
I wish I could be there
Where you all live and share

I wish I was there
Where Naam is all you hear

I wish I was near
To you who are all dear

I wish I could bare
The small airfare

I wish I could dry my hair
With the same fresh air

I wish I was there
Not here or elsewhere

I wish I could hear
And not sit here and impair

I wish I was there
In all your day-care

I wish I could run there
Even without footwear

I wish I wasn't here
Wondering in despair

I wish I could be there
Where all of you glare

I wish I was there
It brings me to a tear

I wish there was a software
That took me right there

I wish I wasn't here
But there with you all I swear!
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Re: I wish . . .
November 29, 2010 06:16AM
Beautifully said
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Re: I wish . . .
December 03, 2010 07:32AM
Dil dee khich!!!!! sad smiley

I wish I was there, where there is love
I wish I was there, where amrit sprinkles from above

I wish I was there, where voices sing in bairaag
with no chinta, no shame, no egoistic fog

I wish I was there, basking in sweet words
I wish I was there, eating up thirds!

I wish I was there, where the world is forgotten
I wish I wasn't here, where krodh makes hearts go rotten

I wish I was there, where faces are aglow
I hate the feeling, when I must get up and go
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Re: I wish . . .
December 03, 2010 02:25PM
Beautiful poems Amritvela jee and SK jee.

Kulbir Singh
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Re: I wish . . .
December 03, 2010 02:34PM
I wish I was there, eating up thirds!

I could not follow it.sad smiley
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Re: I wish . . .
December 03, 2010 03:56PM
Bhai Sahib, that is referring to the place where Guru ka langar is never-ending! smiling smiley Sometimes when we are served langar, we are served seconds, meaning a second serving... then even thirds... And the food is amazing... naam-filled daals, and parshadey, and even cakes and cookies... what a place! grinning smiley
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Re: I wish . . .
December 03, 2010 04:03PM
I wish Amrit Vela was 24 seven
because this time is my heaven

Your face radiates in the moon, but I wish for the divine Noon
In this time, I seek your darshan in a private room.

I wish for the sunset so the day will end
In this time I get to say "Amen, Amen"

At night, I wish to recite Sohila to my best friend
I wish, I wish he will continue to wake me up for heaven.

I wish, I wish I can remember the day is close to its end
This way I will never forget my best friend.

During TeenKaal we observe the day has come but will soon diminish
Thus, I wish I wish that in these times I can see your divine image

I wish to observe Sohila and the "three- times prayer"
This way, I will always remember my friend is near.
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