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Posted by Sukhdev Singh 
Black Crow
March 07, 2010 06:22PM


Black Crow, cry to me,



I feel your pain, fly with me,



I share in this separation, die with me,



I have done my preparation, say goodbye with me.



Let us be perfection in absolute chaos.



Let us scream out in pain in absolute calmness.



Let us feel the night and the day in perfect contemplation.



Let us not forget for a moment that we search for redemption.



Black Crow share in my embrace,



Let our callings not go to waste.



Tonight we will be heard,



Let us make haste.

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Re: Black Crow
March 08, 2010 11:23AM


Bhai Sukhdev Singh Jio,



Waheguru ji ka khalsa, Waheguru ji ki Fateh



Beautiful poetic form of a vishorra. May I advice something that the heading to me seems 'Black koel' is better than a crow. Rest, you know better what it should be. 



With Regards, JASJIT SINGH

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Re: Black Crow
March 08, 2010 12:36PM


Bahut Khoob!

Kulbir Singh

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Re: Black Crow
April 15, 2010 11:08AM
Veerji's poem has inspired another


Black crow, fly with me
Let us flock to our Preetem, soar with me
He dwells in this home, search with me
Maya holds us down, break free with me
Let us sing together as the rain pours down
Let us scream in the sunlight and not make a sound
Let us weep for his darshan through the night
Let us never stop dreaming for His blessed sight
Black crow, let us smile at His grace
When the time is right He will show us His sweet face
He has kept us out of His Holy Gates
But the hour is approaching
Be ready for your fate
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Re: Black Crow
April 15, 2010 11:57AM
Black crow, your time has come.

The flocks are flying in beautiful rang.

Your sisters are singing at the tops of their lungs.

Join in sweet soul, let me hear you scream.

Oh beloved crows, let us dare to dream.

Our tears do not go unheard.

He hears our callings, oh early bird.

Scream and cry and die in his rang.

I have heard he is compasionate.

One day he will come.
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