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Feeling Him

Posted by guptpoet 
Feeling Him
February 16, 2011 12:44PM
Naam has entered,
Within every pore.
I’ve lost my conscience,
I can’t feel anymore.

Unable to feel,
Nothing beyond the Lord.
I’ve wasted so much time,
In the world which I explored.

This is so precious,
I didn’t realize the jewel.
I saw it as glass,
O, what a fool!
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Re: Feeling Him
February 16, 2011 06:51PM
Good expressions thumbs up
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Re: Feeling Him
February 16, 2011 10:53PM
Excellent Jee

Nice to see some poetic work after so long.
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Re: Feeling Him
February 17, 2011 08:28AM
Quote

This is so precious,
I didn’t realize the jewel.
I saw it as glass,
O, what a fool!

Not a fool anymore, because you have realized the price of this jewel now.

Good poem!

Kulbir Singh
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Re: Feeling Him
February 17, 2011 01:30PM
Naam has entered,
Within every pore.
I’ve lost my conscience,
I can’t feel anymore.

Vaheguru, beautiful poem. Keep it up.
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Re: Feeling Him
February 20, 2011 10:02PM
beautiful peom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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